From 7a956a95abb3d3993e8d9900189d8d32eb00768b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: =?UTF-8?q?benjamin=20melan=C3=A7on?= Date: Fri, 21 Aug 2020 10:17:57 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Shorten and clarify cheerful (upbeat) voice --- content-style-guide.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/content-style-guide.md b/content-style-guide.md index 350321f..d9c4d68 100644 --- a/content-style-guide.md +++ b/content-style-guide.md @@ -14,10 +14,10 @@ Good content is: ### Voice and tone -Agaric’s voice is: +Agaric's voice is: * Confident but not arrogant -* Cheerful but not Pollyanna-ish +* Upbeat but not in denial * Unconstrained but not incomprehensible * Open, curious, eclectic; but not scattered @@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ Agaric’s voice is friendly and straightforward. Our priority is sharing useful Agaric’s voice is: * Confident but not arrogant -* Cheerful but not pollyannaish +* Upbeat but not in denial * Unconstrained but not incomprehensible * Open (curious, eclectic) but not scattered