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 # Weekly Rhythm
 
-The weekly rhythm of Agaric's internal communication flows like this:
+Agaric's weekly communication is structured like this:
 
  * [Monday check-in](monday-checkin)
  * Tuesday worker-owner meeting
@@ -13,5 +13,5 @@ One hour is the maximum time for any meeting (including Friday review & planning
 
 No (internal co-op-wide) meetings on Thursdays.
 
-The worker-owner meeting happens weekly with an agenda in advance. If there is no topics to discuss it is skipped.  There is no check-in (stand up) meeting on Tuesday.
+The worker-owner meeting happens weekly with an agenda in advance. If there are no topics put forward to discuss it is skipped.  There is no check-in (stand up) meeting on Tuesday.