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## Writing About People
We write the same way we build software: with a person-first perspective. Whether you are writing for an internal or external audience, it is important to write for and about other people in a way that is compassionate, inclusive, and respectful. Being aware of the impact of your language will help make Agaric a better place to work and a better steward of our values in the world. In this section we will lay out some guidelines for writing about people with compassion, and share some resources for further learning.
We write the same way we build software: with a person-first perspective. Whether writing for an internal or external audience, write for and about other people in a way that is compassionate, inclusive, and respectful. Being aware of the impact of our language will help make Agaric a better place to work and a better steward of our values in the world.
### Age
Do not reference a person's age unless it is relevant to what you are writing. If it is relevant, include the person's specific age, offset by commas.
The CEO, 16, just got her driver's license.
Do not refer to people using age-related descriptors like “young,” “old,” or “elderly.”
Do not refer to people using age-related descriptors like "young", "old", or "elderly".
### Ability
Dont refer to a persons ability unless its relevant to what youre writing. If you need to mention it, use language that emphasizes the person first: ”she has a disability” rather than “she is disabled.” When writing about a person with disabilities, do not use the words “suffer,” “victim,” or “handicapped.” “Handicapped parking” is OK. Avoid using ableist language whenever possible.
Do not refer to a person's ability unless it is relevant to what you are writing. If you need to mention it, use language that emphasizes the person first: "she has a disability" rather than "she is disabled." When writing about a person with disabilities, do not use the words "suffer," "victim," or "handicapped." "Handicapped parking" is OK.
Avoid ableist language.
### Gender and sexuality
Don not call groups of people “guys.” "All" is a useful, non-gendered term for addressing groups of people.
Do not call women “girls.”
Avoid gendered terms in favor of neutral alternatives, like “server” instead of “waitress” and “businessperson” instead of “businessman.”
Its OK to use “they” as a singular pronoun.
Don not call groups of people "guys". "All" is a useful, non-gendered term for addressing groups of people.
Do not call women "girls".
Avoid gendered terms in favor of neutral alternatives, like "server” instead of “waitress” and “businessperson” instead of “businessman.”
Use "they" as a singular pronoun.
Use the following words as modifiers, but never as nouns:
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* queer
* LGBT
Don not use these words in reference to LGBTQIA people or communities:
Do not use these words in reference to LGBTQIA people or communities:
* homosexual
* lifestyle
* preference
Do not use “same-sex” marriage, unless the distinction is relevant to what youre writing. Avoid using “gay marriage," instead use “marriage.”
Do not use "same-sex" marriage, unless the distinction is relevant to what you are writing, simply use “marriage.”
When writing about a person, use their communicated pronouns. When in doubt, just ask for their pronouns or use their name.
When writing about a person, use their communicated pronouns. When in doubt, ask for their pronouns or use their name.
### Hearing
Use “deaf” as an adjective to describe a person with significant hearing loss. You can also use “partially deaf” or “hard of hearing.”
Use "deaf" as an adjective to describe a person with significant hearing loss. You can also use "partially deaf" or "hard of hearing".
### Medical conditions
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Do not describe a person as "mentally ill." If a reference to a person's mental or cognitive condition is warranted, use the same rules as writing about abilities or medical conditions and emphasize the person first.
### Vision
Use the adjective “blind” to describe a person who is unable to see. Use “low vision” to describe a person with limited vision.
Use the adjective "blind" to describe a person who is unable to see. Use "low vision" to describe a person with limited sight.
## Grammar and mechanics
Adhering to certain rules of grammar and mechanics helps us keep our writing clear and consistent. This section will lay out our house style, which applies to all of our content unless otherwise noted in this guide. (We cover a lot of ground in this section—the search feature will help if you are looking for something in particular.)
### Basics
Write for all readers. Some people will read every word you write. Others will just skim. Help everyone read better by grouping related ideas together and using descriptive headers and subheaders.
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#### Emoji
Emoji are a fun way to add humor and visual interest to your writing, but use them infrequently and deliberately. Keep them out of blog posts and web copy entirely.
Keep out of blog posts and web copy entirely.
Emoji are a fun way to add humor and visual interest to your writing, but use them infrequently and deliberately.
#### Numbers
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#### Ranges and spans
Use an en-dash (­) to indicate a range or span of numbers. (On Mac: Option + - (dash). On Windows: Control + -. On Debian or Ubuntu with compose key enabled: compose + --.
Use an en-dash (­) to indicate a range or span of numbers. (On Mac: Option + `-` (dash). On Windows: Control + `-` (dash). On Debian or Ubuntu with compose key enabled: compose + `--.` (dash dash period).
It takes 2030 days.
#### Money
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##### Apostrophes
The apostrophe's most common use is making a word possessive. If the word already ends in an s and it is singular, you also add an 's. If the word ends in an s and is plural, just add an apostrophe.
The doughnut thief ate Sams doughnut.
The doughnut thief ate Chriss doughnut.
The doughnut thief ate the managers doughnuts.
The doughnut thief ate Sam's doughnut.
The doughnut thief ate Chris's doughnut.
The doughnut thief ate the managers' doughnuts.
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Note the exception to this rule: the word **it**, which does not use an apostrophe for its possessive, for example: "Our competitor had all its clients' websites hacked." Agaric avoids contractions so we do not ever use **it's** but rather **it is**.
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The alt tag is the most basic form of image description, and it should be included on all images. The language will depend on the purpose of the image:
* If it is a creative photo or supports a story, describe the image in detail in a brief caption.
* If the image is serving a specific function, describe whats inside the image in detail. People who dont see the image should come away with the same information as if they had.
* If the image is serving a specific function, describe what is inside the image in detail. People who dont see the image should come away with the same information as if they had.
* If you are sharing a chart or graph, include the data in the alt text so people have all the important information.
Each browser handles alt tags differently. Supplement images with standard captions when possible.
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Avoid colloquial phrases that relate to money, like “five-and-dime,” “greenbacks,” or “c-notes.” These will not translate well.
## Word list
## Word list (specialized vocabulary)
* add-on (noun, adjective), add on (verb)
* back end (noun), back-end (adjective)
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* cooperative
* coworker
* Cloudflare
* COVID-19
* dropdown (noun, adjective), drop down (verb)
* e-commerce
* e-mail
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* automagically
* funnel, incentivize, leverage, disruption, thought leader, or other fluffy corporate terms
* internets, interwebs, or any other variation of the word “internet”
* internets, interwebs, or any other variation of the word "internet"
* ninja, rockstar, wizard, unicorn (unless referring to a literal ninja, rockstar, wizard, or unicorn)
* young, old, elderly, or any other word describing a person's age
* crushing it, killing it